Lacey's fun holiday

I am trying to use more describing words to make my story more interesting.

I was playing on my xbox and suddenly my tooth fell out so I put it under my pillow. I went to sleep and I woke up in the morning and I looked under my pillow. There was 4 dollars so me and mum went to the mall and I got some cool stuff. The next morning Franklin's tooth falls out. He got 3 dollars. Pixel's tooth falls out the next morning and they got some cool stuff too.

The most weird weekend I have ever had.

I AM LEARNING TO USE INTERESTING WORDS TO MAKE MY STORY BETTER.

I was fast asleep in my bed.
Chloe woke me up with a roar.
We saw something green.
Chloe said it was a green moon.
We ran to dad and Chloe said, "I saw a green moon."
Dad said it was an airplane. I was feeling so much better.
Then I fell back asleep.
Chloe stayed up for a while.

I was sleeping peacefully and Chloe and Pixel ran in my room and yelled in my face to wake me up so that we would be the first ones up. That's what they said. As soon as I got to my
room again they said something like mumble mumble mumble.
I said: "Are you saying that?"
They said: "Yes we are!"
So I walked in my room and then my bed was all wet. They put juice on my bed.
"Why did you do it?"
"It's funny."
"Oh."
"I do guess it's funny."
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha,
"Hay are you laughing about me?"
"No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Ok, that is scary."
"Are you ok?"
"Yes."

My best weekend

Me, mum, dad, Lily, Chloe, Franklin and Pixel all went to the store.
I got two or 3 stamps from a lady Chloe got 3 or1 stamps and Lily got two.
Me and mum had a great time and so did Lily and Chloe and Pixel. The boys don't like going in the mall and the two dollar shop. They just want to play cool scary games.
And as for the girls, we like to scare them when there done.
We also like going to McDonald's. We want it now but we can't.
We love KFC.
We all went to KFC and then we played in the park next to where we live and Lily loved it.
so....... So what um were you going to say? that Franklin is eating your food, Oh no !!!!!!!!!

My amazing holiday

I am learning to use more describing words in my stories

I was playing on my xbox and suddenly my tooth fell out so I put it under my pillow and I fell asleep. I woke up in the morning and there was $4 under there. Then me and mum went to the mall. In the last two days Pixel and Franklin have lost their teeth. Chloe didn't but she still got something. We all got some cool stuff. Pixel and Franklin had $3. Lily got some stuff too. We got some new clothes for the new baby and we got some thing for mum too. In the next holidays we're going to go to the beach and I think we are going to have a lot of fun.